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Author: love gone wrong
ASL Info:    27/m/colorado
Elite Ratio:    2.14 - 337 /381 /42
Words: 68
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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i was told by several people to write something other than first person(webmaster includeed) so i thought id give it a shot. what do you think?


Rotting on the inside
Black holes in which to hide
Locked away from life itself
Confidence and love on the shelf
Trying to survive
Building a hive
A type of security blanket
To hide make it
A tomb of sorts
Built by cohorts
Warm, dry and all alone
Setting the mood....feeling the tone
The lid is shut
Darkness hiding the cut
Hiding the pain
In vain

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