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A Start to an Ending

Author: MysterydarkPoet
ASL Info:    20/f/Aust
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Words: 83
Class/Type: Poetry /Serious
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A Start to an Ending

It's time to sow
the seed of hope,
because i'm done
with being broke,
there's nothing left,
but what the mirror reflects,
and it's time this retired hero
was brought back to the game
cause he's building up his fame,
so let's savour our misery
and sip it slowly
while listeing to songs
that make your heart break
for there is a priceless price
at stake,
and the evidence shows
more than we see
so let tomorrow,
be the start to an ending

Submitted on 2007-10-03 03:52:55     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  To every ending, a new beginning is just around the corner. I guess that why clinging to hope is very important. This poem came full circle! I hope you have many bright tomorrows after life's storms. Sharon
| Posted on 2007-10-18 00:00:00 | by Peggy Paris | [ Reply to This ]

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