i cant let this in -------------------------------------------
i cant let this in.
these thoughts are a sin
i dont knwo where im going
but i know where ive been
i wish i could be forgiven
but that'd take it all away
i just wish we could be okay
but things have faded
and people have changed it
Makes the reader continue to wonder what type of thoughts wander through your mind. Is this a horrible technique? No. Not at all. I think this made your poem mysterious--I like it. I like it a lot.
You just need a touch of checking your grammar and spelling, but other than that, a short write full of wonder.
Submission Name: i cant let this in
