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    dots Submission Name: Love Me For Medots
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    Author: AngelinDisguise
    ASL Info:    23/F/AUS
    Elite Ratio:    2.23 - 133/171/100
    Words: 124
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsLove Me For Medots
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    It's hard for me to love,
    After all that i have been through
    But i want to give it a chance
    I want to be with you

    So say that you won't leave me
    Promise that you'll stay,
    Cause my heart has already been Broken,
    What more is there to say?

    I won't say it will be easy,
    Cause i know that it won't be,
    And when we are together
    I'll make you feel free.

    I'll do what you want
    I'll bring you the moon,
    Cause when you feel the same About me,
    It won't be too soon.

    So here is my requst,
    Here is a plea,
    Don't break my heart again,
    Just love me for me!





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      love me for me [as in for who i am] or love me for me [as in coz i cannot]...?

    love is a hard thing.
    people seem to break hearts like kids break toys these days. some kids break them with the intention of being able to put them back together while others break them so they can get new and better ones...

    you have lines that remind me of songs right through out this piece.

    one is love fool by the cardigans 'love me love me pretend that you love me/ i dont care if you really care so long as you dont go' and another is sinatra's 'fly me to the moon'
    im not sure these were intentional but it is just interesting that you have expressed yourself in ways many people have done so before.

    i hope he treats you right.
    | Posted on 2007-11-02 00:00:00 | by Someones Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
      i like this, as someone who has been burned by love and afraid to go into it again, i can understand what your feeling and saying to this guy. hope it all works out. good poem. Joanna
    | Posted on 2007-10-04 00:00:00 | by heartless_ | [ Reply to This ]


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