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    dots Submission Name: One Day I'll Say I Hate youdots
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    Author: dancer06
    ASL Info:    20/f
    Elite Ratio:    4.74 - 232/171/43
    Words: 121
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 222
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    Bytes: 714



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       I'm just mad. I wonder how many times I can say in my head "i hate you" before I really will.


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    dotsOne Day I'll Say I Hate youdots
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    One day I'll say I hate you.
    And I will really mean it.
    One day you'll say you hate me too,
    and our future together, we can forget.

    One day I think I'll miss you,
    And I will really feel it.
    One day you'll say you miss me too,
    and think about how perfectly we fit.

    One day I will forget you
    a day I hope that day draws near
    One day you will forget me too.
    That day I will shed my last tear.

    But for now I only think in my head
    How much i really despise you
    And I'll keep you so misled
    You'll wonder if anything I said was every true






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      Just reading this poem reminds me of myself sometimes. When there are people I really hate, I smile, and pretend to like them. I don't actually come out and tell them how much I abhor them. But, as your poem notes, one day the true feeling will come forward and the person will know how you really feel about them.

    This write was very touching. Good job.

    ~Steph.
    | Posted on 2007-10-04 00:00:00 | by xXCptn_SephyXx | [ Reply to This ]


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