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    dots Submission Name: Faithfuldots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 23
    Class/Type: Prose/Love
    Total Views: 840
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 187



    Description:
       No matter what Life has in store for us

    blind is our vision

    thankfully

    for there is hope in the unseen

    beauty in this life

    To Creation, to soul friends and Love, Peace, Joy, Grace, Faith!!!


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    dotsFaithfuldots
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    Let us hover
    over time
    unfolding as dawn flower
    beauty divine
    Knowing nothing of
    scheduled obligation
    soaring as red hawk
    nourishing vine




    Submitted on 2004-06-22 11:41:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I really think this is good. I liked the part about knowing nothing of scheduled obligation best. I think you have to spend a lot of time living in the rural part of the world to really appreciate that.
    And the red tailed hawk is a beautiful poem all in it's own image.
    Dave
    | Posted on 2004-06-25 00:00:00 | by Sandburg | [ Reply to This ]
      This is really good. I think that the minimalism is perfect, and the images were beautiful. I really like the last two lines.
    | Posted on 2004-06-22 00:00:00 | by cuddledumplin | [ Reply to This ]
      short and sweet and to the point. love the minimalism. it is indeed a gift to be able to wrap up thoughts in such a short space! you done good! i love in your description when you say "...there is hope in the unseen/beauty in this life." amen i say to you!
    | Posted on 2004-06-22 00:00:00 | by magnicat | [ Reply to This ]


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