I really think this is good. I liked the part about knowing nothing of scheduled obligation best. I think you have to spend a lot of time living in the rural part of the world to really appreciate that. And the red tailed hawk is a beautiful poem all in it's own image. Dave
short and sweet and to the point. love the minimalism. it is indeed a gift to be able to wrap up thoughts in such a short space! you done good! i love in your description when you say "...there is hope in the unseen/beauty in this life." amen i say to you!