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    dots Submission Name: My Heartdots
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    Author: lyonhart08
    ASL Info:    17/Male/Keene, NH
    Elite Ratio:    3.73 - 9/7/4
    Words: 27
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 177
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    dotsMy Heartdots
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    My heart, forlorn, was set ablaze,
    As I waited long, long days.
    I wish she was here to set me free,
    But, lonely will I ever be.




    Submitted on 2007-10-04 08:54:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    Nice little write you have here. It seems as thought you were broken hearted. It is quite obvious really. I guess that everyone has been there and most of us can relate to the feeling.

    Every so often, we feel that when somebody dumps us is the worst thing that transpires... but then as time elapses we get cognizant that it was not as bad as we thought ...... don’t know. I surmise that what I'm actually trying to tell you, very inarticulately, fully aware that is a very tacky thing to say, is that time heels whatever wound we might have.

    Hopefully all that makes sense, I do apologize if not.


    Best wishes,



    Ethan
    | Posted on 2007-10-04 00:00:00 | by Ethan Brody | [ Reply to This ]



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