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    dots Submission Name: Shedots
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    Author: Xx_bang_bang_
    Elite Ratio:    1.89 - 23/24/19
    Words: 94
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    She's an unappreciated miracle
    A Van Gogh hanging on the wall of an empty room
    Love songs sung to the brokenhearted

    No one sees how she lights the world like sunshine
    She turns the deepest pits of hell into heaven
    Her cry makes the angels weep

    Take out my eyes and see every star that follows her
    She walks like she's not moving
    Her eyes are why the earth turns
    She speaks like the Sirens song

    She's the needle in the haystack
    The beauty in the eye of the beholder




    Submitted on 2007-10-04 09:02:12     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This made me want to hear more from you. Its good.
    | Posted on 2007-10-06 00:00:00 | by deegypook | [ Reply to This ]
      What a gal! Seriously, your poem was truly beautiful, and I loved the ending, "She's the needle in the haystack
    The beauty in the eye of the beholder." Perhaps we all have a bit of that beauty inside. :-) Sharon
    | Posted on 2007-10-05 00:00:00 | by Peggy Paris | [ Reply to This ]
      A bella laide, this reminds me of my woman who wears a golden hat. Like kissing a ghost that has no lip;s. Well done old sport
    | Posted on 2007-10-04 00:00:00 | by H.Redd | [ Reply to This ]



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