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    Author: Kube
    ASL Info:    24/M/Australia
    Elite Ratio:    1.93 - 64/56/32
    Words: 83
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsMinddots
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    What do I call myself this time
    A class of my own with a source of evil
    Something that I call relief
    It kills me slowly
    And I know, but I do it
    Another taste might help
    Head in my hands thinking
    Thinking why I am like I am
    I have a damn choice
    A damn hope
    When do I take this hope?
    The time is never unless I say it is
    I have it all
    But I just donít know yet.




    Submitted on 2007-10-05 08:16:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      nice! you always have a choice. But you have to be willing to take that choice. That is the hardest. willpower..



    rip and rot
    Grim Aylin
    | Posted on 2007-10-07 00:00:00 | by WD-40 | [ Reply to This ]
      Smiling...I think your writing may just show you the way! Good luck, Sharon
    | Posted on 2007-10-05 00:00:00 | by Peggy Paris | [ Reply to This ]


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