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    dots Submission Name: Poland on EYEce Skatesdots
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    Author: Secrets Unheard
    ASL Info:    18/m/nj
    Elite Ratio:    4.25 - 84/101/48
    Words: 82
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 162
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 503



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       Something I wrote. Hah.


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    dotsPoland on EYEce Skatesdots
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    I hold my head up to the sky,
    the blood
    pours down
    my arms
    and I feel the bristles of my hair tickle
    my finger tips.
    Eye sockets are empty of eyes, but full of sight.

    Sand slowly dribbles down my lips and ants crawl out of my ears.


    On gaurd.
    Touche.

    The orchestra plays with the bones of ours fathers, the hairs of our mothers, and the hips of our brothers.

    I yawn.
    Slope = mx+b.




    Submitted on 2007-10-05 09:25:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      wtf
    this is strange, but not so much bad as slightly confuzing
    i have no idea how the title relates to the piece, or how the piece i cohesive at all
    just seems like random stream of conciousness that got posted

    thats cool tho
    just going with whatever pops into your head
    just confuzing is all
    | Posted on 2007-10-05 00:00:00 | by blu_kittin | [ Reply to This ]



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