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    dots Submission Name: Something's Wrongdots
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    Author: D.C.M.
    ASL Info:    18/M/TN.
    Elite Ratio:    2.79 - 73/107/71
    Words: 64
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 140
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 445



    Description:
       Yeah... it gets the point across...
    Liers Cheat
    Cheaters Lie
    They both go to Hell!


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    dotsSomething's Wrongdots
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    Something's hapaning.
    Can you feel it too?
    That pain in my heart.
    The bleeding of my soul.
    My pain, cring out for help.
    Nothing's wrong!
    You can keep lieing.
    Yeah, I see your lies.
    But I dare not speak.
    That's ok, someday..
    Someday maybe you'll see how much I hurt.
    Keep on lieing, maybe I'll die soon..
    Guess what, its all your fault!




    Submitted on 2007-10-05 22:47:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      wow this is powerful and easily one of the best peices you've wrote. Great Job babe.

    Sarah

    Now the non bias [censored], what the crap is goin' on, you better call me and tell me or else leave me a pm on here. At least tell me if your ok, and none of those lies you used to be so famous for boy.
    | Posted on 2007-10-06 00:00:00 | by S.A.M. | [ Reply to This ]
      i know how this feels... it sounds like the person cheated and lied... and you still love them and are with you even though they are slowly killing you inside... definietly can relate... love the way you expressed your feelings. i hope that whoever did this to you reads this and realizes how much they hurt you.

    Fallen-Angel
    | Posted on 2007-10-06 00:00:00 | by poetry chica | [ Reply to This ]
      gee what an angry prespective you have, I think these are nice thoughts to keep to your self, because you will have to fight that pride if you ever want to change your mind.
    | Posted on 2007-10-06 00:00:00 | by forfila | [ Reply to This ]



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