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Something that I should of said
Nothing beats what we could have been, if not are
Life as we know it; could maybe just be it
Ice cubes water down the truth as I know it
Scrub the facts from the truth.
Itís brutal; but itís only a lie if itís not what I believe
See it through my eyes
I canít bare to give the pain
I still know im alive
I canít bare at all
See it when I lie, I see it when I pray
Love me for whatever that I am
I love for nothing, I no longer know what it is
I still seek
Living with a mind thatís not my own
Time needs a redial; I need a tone
I can live when I see fit
But I donít
So thatís why I quit.
Submitted on 2007-10-07 09:28:04
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I really feel your emotion in this...your very gifted...this hit a nerve when i read it...keep up the good work...
| Posted on 2007-10-22 00:00:00 | by
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It very good and many people feel this way from time to time but you should never give up. Good job. ^-^
| Posted on 2007-10-09 00:00:00 | by
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