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    dots Submission Name: Let Him Godots
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    Author: trynfinity
    ASL Info:    32/f/California
    Elite Ratio:    3.12 - 86/94/59
    Words: 174
    Class/Type: Poetry/The pain inside
    Total Views: 70
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    Description:
       THe feeling of no longer being wanted by the person you love


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    dotsLet Him Godots
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    To know that you're ugly
    a means to an end at best.
    That the person that you love
    sees sex with you as a chore
    something they detest.

    No matter how hard you try to believe
    being sexy and fuckable
    is something you know
    you'll never achieve.

    That to have someone want you
    with that burning desire.
    Will never happen,
    unless they're a good liar.

    To look into their eyes
    and see want and pure lust.
    Is a dream you'll never have
    not even just once.

    A failure
    a let down
    a sloppy fuck!
    Unworthy of wanting
    no more pretending it's such.

    Face it!
    You're ugly,
    disgusting at best.
    Let him go
    let him leave you!
    He deserves the rest!

    He's pretended
    he's tried.
    He's faked want and desire.
    In his heart he loves you
    so he became a good liar.

    Let him go
    to be free.
    To find someone better!
    You're ugly
    disgusting
    and that's all you'll be ever!!


    September 19,2007




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      i'm sure you are beautiful. Don't feel worthless, if this is really personal, which it seems. This is not my favorite, mostly because of all the cursing (i prefer clean language). But that's just me. The rest is fine, i know plenty of girls who have been treated like that. Every single one of them, is beautiful, inside and out. Today and tomorrow are days for change. Just for writingthins, thank you. It is beautiful.
    | Posted on 2007-10-08 00:00:00 | by AeThe Lost Poet | [ Reply to This ]



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