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    dots Submission Name: gray harmonydots
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    Author: SYnesthesiA_WaR
    Elite Ratio:    3.48 - 21/24/24
    Words: 222
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsgray harmonydots
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    I can hear your
    song on the wind,

    as our music boxes
    string me that odd harmony...

    the Daughters of Zion are
    too weak to tend their own graves,
    and now you're thinking
    that parked cars are empy coffins.

    I still see you beneath
    flowering branches, as our
    shadows melt to smooth sidewalks,

    holding our breath as the
    summer breeze
    blows us cloying kisses.

    My gentle angel
    prods me
    with his metal sword, and
    only he can wake the dead
    beneath the trees.

    brush the dust from my cold tomb,
    and scatter my ashes.

    Well, you know I sleep much better
    on the sides of lonely roads.

    I dream that i am
    gray like the sky,
    and could diffuse
    into the atmosphere.

    Scarlet words plucked gently
    from your tongue last night
    grip my ankles and
    chain me to the
    rocks beneath your feet.

    We lay awake
    clothed only in shadows,
    and i think my alarm clock
    evaporated
    fifteen minutes later.

    I remember telling you that
    vines may creep up
    through cracks in the
    basement floor,
    to greet you as i vaporize
    before the dawn's intrusion,

    and that nothing could keep me from
    your side of the iron fence.




    Submitted on 2007-10-07 14:42:40     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      ooooooo
    I don't remember ever seeing this one on your page...but I know I read the one you posted after thisssss

    anyway I'm being summoned into the next room so I cannot say much,
    but I like this quite a lot
    and it sorta reminds me of a prologue to a novel or something,
    like a weird memory that has some deeper meaning to the person but they just don't know it...
    weird
    likes

    ~chaos~
    | Posted on 2008-01-06 00:00:00 | by whispered_chaos | [ Reply to This ]
      I really appreciated this after reading 5 successive pieces of utter crap. This was intriguing (parked cars, empty graves) and I liked it.
    | Posted on 2007-10-08 00:00:00 | by EEKS | [ Reply to This ]



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