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Was It All A Lie


Author: trynfinity
ASL Info:    38/f/California
Elite Ratio:    4.43 - 149 /145 /91
Words: 105
Class/Type: Poetry /BrokenHeart
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was everything you promised me a lie?


Was It All A Lie






Am I really that bad
you have to be asleep or ready to fuck.
Just to be near me
without running a muck.
Do you really hate me so much
there's so little left.
I'm that hard to love?
When did I become such a weight?
That I stopped being something worthy
nothing good, nothing great.
Should I just let go
give in?
Know that there's nothing left
no way to win.
Is this really how you see me
what I've become in your eyes?
Every thing I believed in
Was it all just a lie?



April 30,2007




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  Yet again, this is very not-so-good. You should try to dig a little deeper, make your writing a little more personal. Great writers dont write generic teeny bopper angst poetry, they write their own personal odes to pain and love (or whatever their topic of choice is).
| Posted on 2007-10-08 00:00:00 | by EEKS | [ Reply to This ]


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