Description: You were the one thing
I thought was forever.
When I believed
forever was true.
The Truth Behind Forever -------------------------------------------
I never really thought I'd be here
that things would be this way.
That the love you promised was forever
you'd take back just to give away.
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That you'd really stop wanting
forever to share with me.
See it with someone else
like that was how you always dreamed it would be.
~
I never really thought we'd be over
or you'd stop loving me like you did.
I believed in all the forevers
you promised me you'd give.
~
What happened why'd things change?
Why'd you take it away from me?
Was it just a game?
A way to be cruel and mean?
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I wasn't good enough was I?
I didn't give you enough.
I loved you with all I was
and you said I loved you to much.
~
You were the one thing
I thought was forever.
When I believed
forever was true.
~
But forevers just a word to describe
something that lasts longer than you.
It never really happens
forevers don't come true.
~
I know cause I believed
until forever was given away
by you!
this was very, very, unfortunately not that impressive. In fact Im fairly certain every single line of that I have heard before, possibly in a song sung by hilary duff.
you are right when people say forever it is just a word that lasts longer than them. you seem to write a lot about how you have lost someone you hold very dear to you and they had your heart. I think that this is your strong point but its just my opinion this is a brillant write and i think that a loss doesn't mean anything to someone unless you have experienced it.
Submission Name: The Truth Behind Forever
