Description: Leaving my soul shattered,
broken , unable to heal.
A Broken Soul -------------------------------------------
Here I sit
in the dark I cry.
What had been promised
I was stripped of
it was all a lie.
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The love I had believed in
I knew was real
was erased so quickly.
Leaving my soul shattered,
broken , unable to heal.
to whom this may concern i like this poem because you are straight foward with your point. Secondly you show how the effects of the one you love can be gone within the blink of an eye. Finally i would like to read some of your other works if i may please and thank you.
Submission Name: A Broken Soul
