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    dots Submission Name: My First High School Dancedots
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    Author: Silenced Hope
    ASL Info:    18/male/Florida
    Elite Ratio:    3.89 - 48/67/47
    Words: 698
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsMy First High School Dancedots
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    OFF TO NEVER NEVERLAND

    Lights flashin’
    Girls crashin’
    High heels’ll make em tall
    But it’s hard to hop twice when you’re trying not to fall

    With the DJ spinnin’
    And all the bodies shakin’
    When he tells us to stomp
    The buildin’ gets to quakin’

    This is a cult
    This is a mob
    This is a riot waiting to happen
    Fueled by testosterone and estrogen
    Hopped up by adrenaline when we’re told what to do

    Throw your hands in the air
    Wave em like ya don’t care
    And if ya don’t clap
    Just put on your cap
    Rock your way back
    And just do the snap

    This is something I’ve avoided for years
    I never walked close to these things
    I wasn’t a wallflower who liked to tease a date with pleads of
    “I don’t know how to dance”
    And
    “They’ll laugh at me”
    I never even gave them the chance to drag me on the dance floor
    I hid at home with books and decided I’m not the dancing type
    I don’t have two left feet, I checked
    I just hated the whole mob mentality to it all

    But look where I’m at now
    The music has already pierced my eardrum
    With massively thick bass lines and YEAHs
    I’m blind from glow sticks and rave lights
    That seem to catch my eye as they fly right on by on the sly

    And I can tell by how they dance
    Some of these guys
    Are getting lucky tonight

    And I can tell by how they dance
    Some of these girls
    Don’t know they might be watched

    And I can tell by how they dance
    Some of these dancers
    Are already drinking

    But I only see this as I walk in
    Because as she leads me into this sea of bumping and grinding
    Where I’m the kind of guy who’d be fit to drown
    And the beat finds its way up her curves
    She moves
    And I move
    She turns
    And I turn
    And now I understand why she says
    She likes the intimacy of dancing

    And I can tell by her smile
    She’s enjoying the fact I feel so awkward
    A virgin who just had his dance cherry popped

    Gyrating and holding each other
    Like a bootlegged pirouette on repeat
    I get lost in the moment
    And I temporarily forget the feeling of not belonging here
    Not at this dance where parents would kill their kids
    Should they see the moves they’re using
    But just with her
    On the dance floor
    Moving

    My hands on her waist
    Her hands on mine
    As we move to the beat
    In perfect time

    The rap pounds hard
    Blowin’ out of the speakers
    And I’m figurin’ out how to move in these sneakers

    Get lo
    Get lo
    Get lo
    Get lo
    Get low to da flo how lo can ya go

    And I learned tonight
    That I may be white
    But there’s one thing that I know how to do right
    Ands that’s how to get low

    The words of the song merge into the beat
    So she and I are left with nothing but our feet
    So we ignore the others and move in sync
    We just hold each other and move in sync
    We just play the other and move in sync
    We just know each other and move in sync

    Its sweat and perfume
    Her makeup is smudged
    Hair soaked to the root
    I give her a nudge
    And she laughs
    And moves her hips
    She turns
    And moves her lips
    She leans
    And gives a kiss
    And whoo, I’m glad I came

    Harder
    Better
    Faster
    Stronger

    Your stare froze me right into place
    And so you made me harder
    You got me to keep on going
    And so you made me better
    You never once tried to slow down
    And so you made me faster
    You gave me a good hard push
    Thank you for making me stronger

    And I’ve been rambling
    What am I trying to say?
    I hate dances
    But I love dancing with you




    Submitted on 2007-10-07 21:33:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      this one makes me feel the music and the beat,
    hear the song and tap my feet
    feel the moves and the girl under my hand
    the spins and twist...
    it really built a picture of me being there in your shoes and no only seeing it but also experiencing it with you

    basically in short it is a real and alive poem for me...
    sorry that i have nothing constructive to say
    | Posted on 2007-10-07 00:00:00 | by rubymoon | [ Reply to This ]



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