Description: When you like a person it doesn't mean that he/she loves you back...
My Friend -------------------------------------------
There's a boy
whom i know
ever since i first saw him
i already liked him
evrytime i greet him
he never greet back
but when he does
he always asked
"who are you with?"
"where is your friend?"
One day i discovered
He likes my friend
it almost broke my heart
but then i realized
why would i expect
it's always the same thing
over and over again...
Try to be more descriptive of how this boy made you feel, how about some metaphors or alliteration . Be creative, try to explore some new words and descriptions. Review your poem as is, keep this poem as a blueprint or template , go over the poem word for word.