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    dots Submission Name: There Is No Waydots
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    Author: Robert Neville
    ASL Info:    16/m/London
    Elite Ratio:    0.48 - 10/192/232
    Words: 145
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
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    Bytes: 984



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    dotsThere Is No Waydots
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    There Is No Way


    There is no way
    In hell that Iím
    Going down
    And you can all
    Stop tooing and
    Throwing
    I refuse to move
    You can all pay
    Your dues
    Just to prove
    youíve improved
    And Iíll do nothing
    And still

    There is no way
    That I will forever decay
    But whatever happens
    Happens

    There is no way
    That youíll move
    Me down
    And you can all
    Shout and scream
    But I will not
    Cater to your whim
    Your ideas are
    Like a phantom limb
    So stop paying
    Your dues
    Youíve nowt to prove
    And nothing to improve
    And join me
    And say

    There is no way
    That I will forever decay
    But whatever happens
    Happens

    There is no way
    That I will forever decay
    But whatever happens
    Happens




    Submitted on 2007-10-08 11:49:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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