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    dots Submission Name: This Incredible Lovedots
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    Author: Sharati_hottie
    ASL Info:    20/ Female / MICHIGAN
    Elite Ratio:    4.02 - 86/81/90
    Words: 123
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 1164
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 746



    Description:
       This is about trent and me... although he doesn't know that I put it on here, and if he did, he would probably be mad, because he likes to keeo our "lovey-dovey" words to ourselves... I can't help it though... he is a great guy, and I would be honored to be with him any longer than what I have been. I am completely enthralled that we have been together this long as it is... He is the most wonderful man in the world... If he changes it would only be for the even better... but he is pretty much perfect right now.


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    dotsThis Incredible Lovedots
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    To this man who isn't a bore,
    I'll admit to you, you were a whore,
    You are a great and wonderful man,
    Although you don't always act head of the clan,
    You are mine, I love you so much,
    I cannot resist your body, your touchm,
    The way you look at me with those eyes, I could 'NEVER; imagine saying "good-bye",
    to me you are my love, my world,
    I'll never have my world unfurled,
    as long as you are by my side,
    I will do my best to always ablige,
    and help you through any endeavors,
    that you will ever see in life,
    I hope to never cause you strife,
    this incredible love I hold,
    I know will never break the mold.




    Submitted on 2007-10-08 20:12:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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