Description: This is what happens when I let my imagination go. Critize it with all your heart my friends!
THE MUTTERINGS OF A CONFUSED IDIOT -------------------------------------------
THE MUTTERINGS OF A CONFUSED IDIOT
I am not so bright you see,
Sometimes I can be as lost as a fish in the sea
Not understanding the words that are said to my face
I am lost and wondering in the confusions of this case
I am not sure when I will be free
I really don’t want to pay this fee
I see the look you give me
But I am not sure what you are saying
Is it “Idiot” or “Freak”
But if it was, then why would you turn beet?
I am confused you see of these butterflies
You send flying inside me
I am trying to be apart
So I don’t become a patient of the heart
It’s better if I try to be smart
So let’s depart
I must say, the title caught my attention and I had to read it.
I don't really want to criticize it though. In some parts the rhyming seems a little too predictable, but that's all.
"So I don’t become a patient of the heart" is probably my favorite line. It's kind of simple, but says a lot.
Your imagination is very interesting (in a good way).
Submission Name: THE MUTTERINGS OF A CONFUSED IDIOT
