Lost in the confusions of the world by marray proetus

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Submission Name: Lost in the confusions of the world dots

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Author:	marray proetus
ASL Info:	100/F/no where
Elite Ratio:	3.9 - 24/32/30
Words:	135

Class/Type:	Poetry/Love
Total Views:	1205
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The bold is the man and italics is the woman. Yah I know it's pretty random

Lost in the confusions of the world dots

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Dialogue

I am unaware of myself
Tell me what your eyes say, tell me?
There are two eyes
What’s in them
There is a face
Whose face?
Ask your heart, ask the heavens

Lost and wondering in the confusions of the world, I am lost in you.

What happened, tell me about this confusion?
Tell me what has changed?
The world since you came
Don’t say anything
Why not?
Because I might just get lost in your words

Lost and wondering in the confusions of the world, I am lost in you.

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I love these back and forth metaphysical love poems. I never get tired of them.

Who can't resist using the good 'ol "lost in you" phrase? It is sweet and heartwarming.

I like this part of the poem the most:

"What happened, tell me about this confusion?
Tell me what has changed?
The world since you came"

Ah, women. How they change everything. How they light up my eyes and distract my mind. They are capable of changing the world as we see it.
| Posted on 2007-10-09 00:00:00 | by manwithnoname | [ Reply to This ]

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

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