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    dots Submission Name: Yeah? But That's Livingdots
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    Author: doppelganger
    ASL Info:    19/f/your brain
    Elite Ratio:    1.66 - 27/198/141
    Words: 165
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 75
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1147



    Description:
       *well I edited it... dunno how much better it is.. *

    Yeah, so basically I was getting pretty frustrated with people telling me how much of a failure I am and how I'm fucking up my life and how I need "help" and to find god and shit so yeah.


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    dotsYeah? But That's Livingdots
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    So half-assed and half-passed life
    Going nowhere, the middle of the night
    No one walks with her but wayward dreams
    Stares straight ahead but can't see anything

    Heart blank, but full of some special one
    Mind shot but racing faster than the sun
    Blown over by ambition but the world's unshaken
    So she sighs again cuz she can't take it

    Gave herself a faint tattoo this morning
    She fucked up and now her arm just stings
    Marked beginning, maybe he'll keep loving her
    Cursed and waiting for something better

    Maybe...

    Maybe living on the streets of some trashy city
    Playing for crumbs and beer that's just so shitty
    She'll resort to filling her veins with colour
    Forgetting forever about her hated mother

    A self-tattered soul who lives moment by moment
    Can't be bothered to realize how she'll wreck it

    Life!

    But God, to her that's living so,
    Please shut the fuck up
    Spare her the lectures...




    Submitted on 2007-10-09 03:47:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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