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    dots Submission Name: Degrees of a Dying Dreamdots
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    Author: pahyn
    ASL Info:    34/male/Albany, NY
    Elite Ratio:    0.7 - 0/2/6
    Words: 461
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 150
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    Description:
       spoken word, beat poetry.


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    dotsDegrees of a Dying Dreamdots
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    Behind the closed doors of the classroom
    It is easy to fool yourself
    Tell yourself
    That it is the "self"
    That truely matters
    Step into the bump and grind though
    and that illusion soon shatters

    I see masses rushing towards
    social evolution
    Screaming,
    "Sign up now, for the new revolution"
    But at the end of the day
    You have exercised no solution

    Start a campus movement
    and earn extra credit
    toward your fifty-thousand dollar education
    and you still don't get it

    All of the banter is nothing more than theory
    I look to the horizon
    and see only dreary
    While society crumbles and bursts
    at seams that are weak and weary

    All of your thought provoking words
    Are like dead leaves
    Falling to the floor
    So you can take your bullshit
    and leave that at the door
    How can you claim to have the answers
    When we don't even know the question anymore?
    And
    Fail to see
    That the whole world is knocking on hell's door.

    We all just love the junior year
    social commentary
    While another person
    is prematurely burried
    by the system that programmed them

    Trainned and bred
    to compete and kill
    Sell out your dignity
    on the newest thrill
    Snuff out the man standing next to you
    if it will get you to where you have to go
    We would rather do that
    Than shake the hands of someone
    that we don't know
    We close ourselves off from each other
    but WE claim to be enlightened though?

    There is no more sense of community
    Only each person's growing sense
    of self indulgant reality

    All of that education
    and you failed to learn
    That life in its merit
    Has it's own lessons to earn
    There is no chapter
    under that text book cover
    That teaches us
    how to be deccent to one another

    So here is a new lesson for you
    Free of charge
    It's all about the nature
    Of society at large

    Take a moment to ponder,
    That man's only natural preditor
    is himself
    and that the way you live your life
    is less important
    than the accumulation of wealth;
    that all of the suffering in the world
    takes a back seat
    to us fullfilling ourselves

    So, you've earned your degree
    and I guess that should impress me
    Though it has failed to give you insight
    Into the nature of the status quo
    and what is morally right

    If you are going to be so bold
    as to say
    You are going to change the world
    You can start be recognizing
    and realizing
    that if you want to get to the core
    we have to start by changing ourselves
    and stop closing all of these doors.




    Submitted on 2007-10-09 10:07:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      This poem is so true. We pay thousands of dollars to state universities and colleges, but for what really. A huge percentage of college students nowadays are all drop outs. I'm sure this isn't your message though. But I was very compelled by this poem. I really enjoyed it. And at that this poem is going to my favorites. I'll show my friends. It's true that people are taught and brought up to believe all of these theories and techniquel bull[censored] inside of this world, but they know the true answeres, and you are right, how can they know the answere when they don't even know the questions anymore. What is morally right isn't what anyone cares anymore. And I like how you pointed out that the suffering all takes the backseat, as if no one cares about the hurt and the pain inside of the world anymore. I enjoyed the write.
    | Posted on 2007-10-18 00:00:00 | by Crestfallenman | [ Reply to This ]



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