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    dots Submission Name: life is grubbydots

    Author: gwenn sundala
    Elite Ratio:    3.71 - 76/70/51
    Words: 43
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Comedy
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       who doesn`t like magnetic words? this is what i wrote on my aunt`s refrigerator with her magnetic words. my cousin wrote the first two lines, though. thanks for the inspiration, jimothy!!!

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    dotslife is grubbydots

    what a good little dog
    we`re eating!
    you look like
    the usual suspects?
    your love is
    boring everybody
    and up to no good?
    woman has outrageous
    beauty like a
    king who`s easily amused
    by this lunchtime.
    are we there yet?
    smiles, everyone, smiles!!

    Submitted on 2007-10-09 11:24:55     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      you know something gwenn...i just love this...

    and the nonsense makes sense...magnetic words on the fridge...a day in the lives of a family...

    bits and pieces that make a whole...

    lives interacting...the usual suspects!?

    yes...all of us sitting at the table, and we all have a story to tell..even the dog..

    have we reached our individual destinations yet?

    smile it's picture time..we are hardly ever together...

    this is a trip...

    i love it.

    | Posted on 2011-04-22 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]
      yeah this is no nonsense with those magnetic words on the fridge. we wrote more, and then i renamed it, so that'll be here soon...
    | Posted on 2008-03-12 00:00:00 | by gwenn sundala | [ Reply to This ]
      I have read this over a few times and Im still not sure I understand this. Perhaps it has a personal meaning or I am just mising something altogether?
    | Posted on 2007-10-09 00:00:00 | by stormyskies | [ Reply to This ]

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