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    dots Submission Name: Ignotusdots
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    Author: Forest Saint
    ASL Info:    19/M/US
    Elite Ratio:    5.95 - 26/33/29
    Words: 75
    Class/Type: Poetry/Legend
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    dotsIgnotusdots
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    The divine instrument.
    Given power to judge man, the world, or even gods.
    The machine of duality.
    Given ancient knowledge of life and death.

    The agent of sentience.
    Given cognizance that supersedes the past and future.
    The soul-bending faculty.
    Given dominion over existence within reason.

    The harbinger of damnation.
    Given unparalleled power to judge a singular soul.
    The provider of salvation.
    Given also the power to beatify a singular soul.





    Submitted on 2007-10-09 15:52:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      so i just checked for Ignotus in the dictionary and i cannot find it... can you tell me what it means?


    i have no idea what it is you write of.
    it seems amazing to me that one thing could be all of those things as some of them seem to contrdict each other in my mind... to judge and to beautify... strikes me as a contradiction unless in the judging and subsequent change comes beauty...

    knowing life and death seems a little vague to me. knowing what about them? how they work? when they will occur? what both feel like? it seems a little too hazy to be able to pin to anything

    so yeah... left completely clueless as to what this is about...
    | Posted on 2007-10-22 00:00:00 | by Someones Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
      ...I'm going to take a wild swing and say a mirror. Everything within the write itself propels me towards that, because a mirror can "judge" a soul as well as "beautify" it. It's also a "bending faculty" [recall halls of mirrors in the circus?] and within glass one sees oneself, who probably has some rudimentary knowledge of "life and death".
    Though it would be waaay off if an "agent of sentience" was a mirror...oh well.

    Let me know.
    Cheers
    Zurie.
    | Posted on 2007-10-09 00:00:00 | by Azuire | [ Reply to This ]


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