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    dots Submission Name: Still Togetherdots
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    Author: Stygian
    ASL Info:    16/F/USA
    Elite Ratio:    4 - 61/75/37
    Words: 15
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 91
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 106



    Description:
       Thought it was catchy and I liked the play on words.


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    dotsStill Togetherdots
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    even after death
    when our hearts no longer beat
    as one
    they are still
    together




    Submitted on 2007-10-09 21:49:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Very simplistic but in a good way. Makes me think of my two grandparents that I lost over the past month that left loved ones behind, including their spouses.

    Keep up the good work.
    | Posted on 2007-10-11 00:00:00 | by Keaton Volkov | [ Reply to This ]
      that made me think for a minute, lol , but then i got eternal love right?

    Good job i like the way its short but meaningful


    Much love
    xoxo
    ~tainted~
    | Posted on 2007-10-10 00:00:00 | by tainted-faerie | [ Reply to This ]



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