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    dots Submission Name: Persistance & Couragedots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 42
    Class/Type: Prose/Love
    Total Views: 758
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    Bytes: 400



    Description:
       No matter what life throws at us there is comfort and strength in something larger than life within ourselves. May we all appreciate our conditions and have the faith to climb the mountains that seem to loom before us to discover the valley is not of the shadow but of the light.

    Love, Peace, Joy, Grace, Faith!!!


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    dotsPersistance & Couragedots
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    Embrace thine enemy
    Fear
    Infant, Elder,
    Peer
    The ecstacy of
    Exhaustion
    through the Divine
    Needing
    yet
    Giving
    Without warrant one finds
    truth everlasting
    Alpha & Omega
    Love everlasting
    King of Kings
    Virtue inherent
    Purpose
    in
    Truth
    Truth
    in
    Action




    Submitted on 2004-06-22 16:30:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I need lessons from you because I am terrible at deciding how to format poems like this. You have placed the words, not merely written them, and it give a feeling of forward motion as the eye scans down the paper, or screen!.
    Well done.
    Dave
    | Posted on 2004-06-30 00:00:00 | by Sandburg | [ Reply to This ]
      ^.^ I love this... especially the way you emphasize words by seperating them from others and putting them alone. You wrote this in such a manner that despite its length and such it still spoke powerfully...
    ^.^
    -Alli
    | Posted on 2004-06-22 00:00:00 | by Childoutspoken | [ Reply to This ]
      i really like this. you have a way of wrapping up your content in a beautiful, pristine manner. it is hopeful and speaks volumes in such a Divine way! write on!
    | Posted on 2004-06-22 00:00:00 | by magnicat | [ Reply to This ]


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