It seems as though you were waiting for somebody to embrace you or to heel you wounds. I spotted a tinge of resentment and disappointment which probably hinges upon previous unsuccessful relationships..... Your depiction of the way that you are affected by somebody's presence is quite astonishing. One gets the impression that you are describing a drug instead of a person.
I do relate to the piece on account of the fact that I'm not a daring person … so many time have I stammered words while I'm meeting somebody.... especially someone I’m attracted to ....
Additionally, I have to say that the rhythm of the piece was delightfully pleasant and certainly helps convey the massage effectively. Moreover, I enjoyed intensity of this piece and the powerfully telling use of the language.
My only suggestions would be to cast aside the word "their" in the second line, second stanza which sorts of hinders the flow and seems rather superfluous and finally to re - write the first line regarding the last stanza owing to the fact that it sounds rather awkward, at least to me.
Ps: I'm sorry for the previous comment it was a mistake