it's the silence that's slowly killing m
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it's the silence that's slowly killing m
The lie lives that it's all okay but inside it's the truth that says thats it's sad it ended this way it's this unspoken truth that stirs me in my dreams I miss you and you don't know The lie eats everything in me it leaves its print in my shattered heart the tears, the scars its a submersed pain but it doesn't matter cause nobody notices anyway I miss you But i won't say a thing the lie wants all i have to give maybe killing me but i won't let go there's something unresolved but i'll keep this silence and take it to my grave because i miss you and i don't want things to get any worse You might feel the pain If i could tell you again how much i miss you but i'll hush my sorrow and let it subside for tonight i'd rather not hurt you and watch my spirit die let it scream in my head all the things i never said and let it echo from my soul into the black of night that you told me things would be alright but look now behind this facade it's me i'm sad i'm sad...... and i'll admit it to the mirror cause it listens to my cries and i'll scream it into the shadows till my voice is thin and shaky "i'm not okay" |
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| Your words are my weakness. This poem... It's my favourite poem by you. You remind me of things, so many different, awful, memories. You seem to know the other half of things, you seem to know the things in me that just make me hollow. This poem stopped something inside me.... I felt so grey inside when I read this. It hurts to read your work... But thats why I love reading it soo much. You remind me of my own passion... I hope this isn't weird or anything but.. You're beautiful by what you write. By your words. Thats all I can say.. I wish I could..idk. -JK | Posted on 2009-07-23 00:00:00 | by MidnightSun89 | [ Reply to This ] | this is sad, and crazy and lovely | we've all been through things like this, i think "and i'll admit it to the mirror cause it listens to my cries and i'll scream it into the shadows till my voice is thin and shaky "i'm not okay"" i loved this part the best "You might feel the pain If i could tell you again how much i miss you but i'll hush my sorrow and let it subside for tonight i'd rather not hurt you and watch my spirit die" i liked this part a whole lot, too it makes me think of how sometimes it hurts worse to hurt someone you love than it hurts to hurt yourself...i hope that makes sense this was a nicely done piece, and i look forward to seeing more from you in the future xoxo | Posted on 2007-10-16 00:00:00 | by blu_kittin | [ Reply to This ] | |
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