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    dots Submission Name: Slippingdots
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    Author: Suicidalchild51
    ASL Info:    15/f/wa
    Elite Ratio:    3.19 - 402/332/83
    Words: 124
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 119
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 797



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       idk just a quick write i guess


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    dotsSlippingdots
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    I was laying there in your arms
    There isn't a place I'd rather be,
    I was holding on tight
    But you let go you wanted to be free.

    The time I put in to you
    The times you stayed here,
    I put my foot down once
    Letting go of all my fears.

    I slowly fall
    Into a world of doubt
    Its the only world
    I thought I'd knew about.

    But tears fall
    and snakes rise
    Everthing comes to life
    The everything I dispise

    My hopes my Dreams
    Are floating away
    I now its my fault
    Its now i should pay

    I'll slip away
    From your reach to the bottom
    I'll take everything back
    If you'll just save me..




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