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    dots Submission Name: Creature of my minddots
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    Author: Castalia
    ASL Info:    666/N/Hell
    Elite Ratio:    2.21 - 16/33/33
    Words: 182
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 103
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 1240



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    dotsCreature of my minddots
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    Walking through the woods,
    I stumbled upon my reflection.
    I saw it laying motionless,
    Just a little out of my reach.

    It didn't look anyhting like me.
    The creature seemed dead,
    As far as I could tell.

    She was beautiful,
    Yet I was repulsed by her.
    Two wings, I spotted, on her back;
    One white, the other, black.

    The feathered, tattered wings,
    Made me shiver, as I came to realize,
    They were colored with flesh and blood.

    Poor little creature, I thought.

    Suddenly she moved,
    Rising from the dark green grass,
    She wept, I saw.

    Curiousity of her whole being,
    Was what kept me from tears.
    But fear was the feeling,
    Keeping me still.

    She smiled at me, I noticed.
    And with broken wings she flew.
    And with broken wings she fell.

    I admired the sight.
    This beautiful sight, as painful as it was.
    And she rose and flew and fell again.

    Broken, tattered and frayed.
    She rose, and flew, and fell.
    I rose, and flew, and fell.

    Defeated once again.




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