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Let It Die


Author: Priestess
ASL Info:    21/female/usa
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Words: 283
Class/Type: Lyrics /Sorry
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A song for my parents.


Let It Die



Please forget the past, please let it die.
Let it die, let it die, let it die.
Please don't think about it, it only make you cry.
Please don't cry, please don't cry, please don't cry.

Take my hand, can't you see?
Look at these scars, they don't define me.
I may have strayed, but I'm back to you now.
I promise I'll stay, Oh mommy don't ask me how.
Don't ask me how, please don't ask me how.

Oh Daddy don't believe them, there the ones with the sickness.
Let it die, let it die, let it die.
Come on please believe me, 'cause Jesus has healed me.
Don't make me cry, don't make me cry, don't make me cry.

Take my hand, can't you see?
Look at these scars, they don't define me.
I may have strayed, but I'm back to you now.
I promise I'll behave, Oh mommy look at me now!
Look at me now, please just look at me now.

Oh God, oh Jesus please hear my cry!
My mommy and daddy won't let it die.
They want to know what all this talk is about,
but I know that no doctor can figure me out.
Can't they just accept that I was a little lost.
And I'm sure I would have stopped it if this was the cost!

Take my hand, can't you see?
Look at these scars, they don't define me.
I may have strayed, but I'm back in good health.
Jesus has saved me, my lost little self.
Saved myself, he has saved myself.
Saved myself, he has saved myself.
Saved myself, Jesus saved myself.
Saved myself, Jesus saved myself.




Submitted on 2007-10-15 08:59:40     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Wow this is beautiful. i love it.
| Posted on 2007-10-16 00:00:00 | by Demon__666 | [ Reply to This ]
  wow, this is amazing. Repitition works beautifully with you. I hope all works out for you.
| Posted on 2007-10-15 00:00:00 | by save me | [ Reply to This ]


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