Acta non verba my love (your right)
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Acta non verba my love (your right)
The stroke of my pen is an action; it’s in these actions; that gave me lungs, and Muscles, and the freedom of movement to express myself and declare my love, My Love. It’s not just the obsession, to understand and define Your complexity, and views, and Your beauty, for life, but, for my obsession, for my actions, to speak louder than words. |
Submitted on 2007-10-16 09:46:17 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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| I find this write to be written very well You showed us your readers that your Heart is connected to your pen This shows true honest emotion in your write something that I very much appreciate Great Job!!! God Bless Ron Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think Thank You Ron | Posted on 2007-10-16 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ] | "to gave me lungs" I think should perhaps be "that gave me lungs" just a suggestion, it doen't really make sense left like it is. | Other than that...not too shabby at all...i enjoyed this, declaration is the only word i can think of to describe this.... Lovely xoxo | Posted on 2007-10-16 00:00:00 | by blu_kittin | [ Reply to This ] | |
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