Description: i've been a vampire freak my whole life...i would kill to be one...so i just wrote a poem that explains how id be if i ever encountered one. PLEASE TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK!!!!!!!
Bite me Harder my Vampire -------------------------------------------
Come with me
He says
I’ll make u a star in the sky
Come with me
He says
All you have to do is die
His eyes cloud my judgment
But his touch just turns me on
I think I want him to kill me
Even though it sounds so wrong
He smooths his hand
Across my back
And I can feel the shivers rising
His long white daggers pierce my neck
But my screams are not for pain
Harder I say
Bite me harder
I want you do drain me dry
I didn’t think that pain this way
Can leave you with such a hi
God I know I’ve fallen
For the devil himself
But this intoxication is sexy
And paralyzing in itself
So make me a creature of the night
Make me your slave of pleasure
Make me your victim for the rest of my life
Cuz eternity with you is the perfect forever.
This was so creatively twisted and hot at the same time. I love it. I'm reading it thinking oh my gosh, I feel like that, exactly. Did youread my mind? It is a sexy poem and it makes me nervous but I like it all the same. I think the "Bite me harder" send its home, because we all know what is normally associated with this idea of "harder" It so sexual and playful and eerie.........I want more definitely. FAVORITE.
Submission Name: Bite me Harder my Vampire
