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    dots Submission Name: Autumnal BEINgdots

    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 65
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nature
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       Fall is a wonderful, reflective, cyclical time for fond reflection ~*~ <>~
    love,peace,joy&smiles 2 share

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    dotsAutumnal BEINgdots

    Clouds part ~ ~


    Light *

    Blinded in


    Sensing third

    sight <@>

    Soaring with wind

    BEINg a

    kite <>~

    Love immeasurable

    endless depth,


    Encompassing ALL



    Soaring divine


    flight ~*~

    Submitted on 2007-10-17 16:57:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Just want to say that your each poem justifies your name. I love this wonderful panorama of visions.
    | Posted on 2007-10-31 00:00:00 | by Parul garg | [ Reply to This ]
      You give such lovely imagery, It really sooths the heart to read.
    I love it
    | Posted on 2007-10-30 00:00:00 | by forfila | [ Reply to This ]
      It is a wonderful thing to find beauty and joy in the different seasons, in the different places and stages of life. If we spend too much time and energy either reflecting or regretting our past, or if we spend too much time anticipating things to come, we miss out on so much right now. Thanks for sharing this.

    | Posted on 2007-10-19 00:00:00 | by nicelyJ | [ Reply to This ]
      Oh, very pretty...I love the fall!
    | Posted on 2007-10-18 00:00:00 | by Raivn | [ Reply to This ]
      As usual Tiff, you approach everything with a sense of wonder and magic. You are so free, and your words are as well.

    My favourite part is:
    "Soaring with wind

    BEINg a

    kite <>~"
    I wish I could fly. I wish I could soar. I envy the birds.

    I just see fall as a cold bother. But obviously you get more out of it than I do. I choose not to see it in a good way, though. I just appreciate spring and summer. They are rebirth and life. Fall and winter is old age and death. Yuck.

    Reminds me slightly of Starcastle or Yes..."Silver Winds"...
    | Posted on 2007-10-17 00:00:00 | by manwithnoname | [ Reply to This ]

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