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    Author: lori_tab
    ASL Info:    27/f/alabama
    Elite Ratio:    4.33 - 1752/1517/481
    Words: 179
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    The most important thing to consider when in the pursuit of one's desires is the fact that whether we use it or not, we all have control over our own destiny and reality just by the beliefs and thoughts that we entertain every second that we are alive. If you are afraid and doubtful, your reality is one of constantly unchanging and unsatisfying qualities. These thoughts come from a rational and conscious state of mind that we can manipulate. It powers the subconscious, it gives the subconscious orders and information. This is something we should already know and could easily believe and understand.
    Once we know how to harness control over our subconscious and have the ability to enforce our will, we can always be confident, healthy, peaceful, and unafraid. When free from fear we can be masters of our universe, masters of our mind, and therefore our every contribution to the mindless chaos of the "evil" world is a chance to change reality. In this society and generation, reality is given to those who are conscious to it.




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      I think I'll have to agree with this one, because the Bible says kinda what you are saying, except in different verbiage. So a man thinketh, so is he, something along those lines. There are other places that touch on the subject.
    Good Stuff.

    Nicely
    | Posted on 2007-10-19 00:00:00 | by nicelyJ | [ Reply to This ]
      I read something the other day that just about states the opposite of this...saying that if we think too much about something and dwell on it, then we can't have it...but if we sit back and just let it happen, it will.

    I would have to be with you on this though...I think our minds are very powerful things. And definitely not something to be taken lightly.
    | Posted on 2007-10-18 00:00:00 | by Raivn | [ Reply to This ]
      oh jazmine, why cant you write fluff and stuff
    this makes me think too much, and my head hurt
    its thought provoking though...
    i suppose if i was feeling differently i would like this infinitely more

    xoxo
    | Posted on 2007-10-18 00:00:00 | by blu_kittin | [ Reply to This ]


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