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    dots Submission Name: Quuestions... Where Are The Answers?dots
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    Author: jackz
    ASL Info:    24/F/OH
    Elite Ratio:    3.76 - 591/622/378
    Words: 245
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/What is
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       Who Knows. I sure do not. Hell maybe I will someday. Too bad not anytime soon.


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    dotsQuuestions... Where Are The Answers?dots
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    Answer me This…

    Why do things always end up in ways we do not expect nor like?

    Why is life always taking its "toll" on us... and why do we allow it to show?

    With bags under our eyes
    And a shitty mood to go with those bags?

    Why is the answer always... TIME.

    "Give it time" You hear, and things will "end" up okay.
    But what is Okay?
    What does "Okay" really mean?

    We will accept that things are "Okay" in the end?
    Or will we be yet again unsatisfied with our lives?

    It seems there are always more questions than answers
    Everything’s unknown for reason ...

    And maybe that reason ... Is really a reason for a person to find out the unknown.
    Some how, someway...

    And the reasons is not to simply “accept” and go on with out lives!

    Maybe I'm that person whom is meant to find the unknown... Then I am the one to spread this knowledge I have obtained to OTHERS!!!???

    See I wish I knew what I know now back then, so I could have made the difference I have in my life Sooner, Rather than Later!

    I wish we all have the knowledge we obtain from life when we really needed it rather than after a life lesson... After the fact!

    Although I'm sure we all Long for this ... Or maybe not.




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      I could not help but think about Robert Frost and his path less taken making all the difference. All that any of us can do is try our best. To do any less is not being fair to ourselves or others around us. You certainly gave us some food for thought in this piece! Sharon
    | Posted on 2007-11-07 00:00:00 | by Peggy Paris | [ Reply to This ]
      I really get this one. It's excellent, there are more questions than answers because people ask so many. I've been questioning a lot of things lately, just haven't found the answers. Great write, really like it. Shadow
    | Posted on 2007-10-23 00:00:00 | by Shadow24968 | [ Reply to This ]
      I know exactly what you mean

    People expect time to be the ultimate panacea for all things that go wrong, or they expect praying to cure their ills, and in the end the only thing that matters is what you do to change your situation, not how long you waited or how much you prayed for help
    I like you

    good write, -Bill
    | Posted on 2007-10-18 00:00:00 | by Big_Bill789 | [ Reply to This ]


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