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    dots Submission Name: misery and degressiondots
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    Author: 1949mercury
    ASL Info:    34 male orange county
    Elite Ratio:    3.33 - 9/8/9
    Words: 75
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 75
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    Bytes: 490



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       about a miserable person i may know


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    dotsmisery and degressiondots
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    an advocator to misery
    its what she lives for

    she peaks in orgasim
    as she breaks his soul
    the bride to be
    as the groom of misery awaits
    entangling himself....
    into her sickness


    an advocator to misery
    her love has locked in
    he lays her path for her conquest
    not a true breathe of love does she exhale


    misery and degression
    characteristics of the advocator




    Submitted on 2007-10-18 07:26:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      very good write about a missing emotional connection in the trappings of sex and love
    the girl in this poem seems twisted in her thoughts of the bride and he simply ignores it all, because of blind love
    I guess thats what I mean
    Sorry its really early,

    Either way you did a good write here, just touch up the grammar/spelling errors as usual
    and good job-
    -Bill
    | Posted on 2007-10-18 00:00:00 | by Big_Bill789 | [ Reply to This ]



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