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    dots Submission Name: Klepto Loverdots
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    Author: dismal_s child
    ASL Info:    17/F/Florida
    Elite Ratio:    3.19 - 303/296/116
    Words: 94
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 163
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 668



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       to my boyfriend darrell


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    dotsKlepto Loverdots
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    I never wanted my smile 
    
to come from yor tears
    
I didn't know 
    
I was your biggest fear 
    

    
I can understand
    
His spell His gaze
    
Leading me further 
    
into this maze
    

    
I wear his kiss
    
as a badge of pride
    
Below my ear
    
coming from deep inside
    

    
I fell hard and fast
    
I know you did too
    
If only we knew 
    
what unpredicable thing he'll do
    

    
I hear the rumours 
    
deep gurgling noise
    
but above the soft roar
    
stands his voice
    
~carol




    Submitted on 2007-10-18 09:04:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      hey baby
    i love you so very much and you know that we have come so far since that day four month to be exact but any ways i love you so much and just remember that my love will die and ill never let go and also i will never leave you never ever i love you to much to get up and leave now but anyways...........
    i love you baby with all of my heart
    <3 always & forever
    Darrell
    | Posted on 2008-02-13 00:00:00 | by anguished_child | [ Reply to This ]
      
    | Posted on 2008-02-13 00:00:00 | by anguished_child | [ Reply to This ]
      i hope he is treating you well. if he isn't then you need to dump him. your time and energy are too precious to waste on someone who is not wirthy of you.

    yes, i know, i don't think any boy is worthy of you, my Angel! lol

    love and kisses,
    hugz n misses,
    Momma
    | Posted on 2007-10-24 00:00:00 | by ruejacobs | [ Reply to This ]
      very entrancing poem

    and this is for your boyfriend huh?
    kind of confusing but it still speaks volumes about loves entanglements and how it can be a very deceiving thing and very rewarding thing at the same moment
    its a very tricky thing to write about without being cliché to the point of making me sick
    -but I feel fine

    good job- Bill
    | Posted on 2007-10-18 00:00:00 | by Big_Bill789 | [ Reply to This ]


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