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    dots Submission Name: "Bitch"dots
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    Author: graffitijeans
    ASL Info:    20/f/houston
    Elite Ratio:    2.93 - 281/392/143
    Words: 93
    Class/Type: Misc/Passion
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    Bytes: 583



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       Martin Luther King had a dream. So do I.


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    dots"Bitch"dots
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    Meredith Brooks said it.
    "I'm a bitch".
    But the silly part is, she doesn't mean it.
    No one is a bitch.
    Take away the slanderous definition.
    And all you've left is a female dog.
    She is a human...and so am I.
    Humans must grow and learn not to self depricate or make others fall down either...
    And I am tired of all of the evils in the world that exist because of seven deadly sins...
    And I just want peace of mind...
    Combined with silliness and joy and beauty and everything divine.




    Submitted on 2007-10-18 11:50:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      well... I think the basic philosphical thought is a little jumbled and unfinished in here... if you gave it a little more effort, you might be able to complete the thought that is on your mind.
    | Posted on 2007-10-19 00:00:00 | by psyko | [ Reply to This ]
      this was interesting. and yet it did not make me feel good as a human.
    | Posted on 2007-10-19 00:00:00 | by EEKS | [ Reply to This ]
      hey hi and thanx for the comment I like your view on yor post i alwaz thought people shouldnt classify people as [censored]es for the same reason u do anywaz great vent of vocals

    Thanx
    Sandman
    | Posted on 2007-10-18 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]
      I like this one as well, although not your strongest piece, it does show your view of the world. You understand that words only mean things when humans create their meanings and humans are bound to do evils no matter how good a person and devoted to their god.
    This is a crazy world.
    Good write - Bill
    | Posted on 2007-10-18 00:00:00 | by Big_Bill789 | [ Reply to This ]
      And I just want peace of mind...
    Combined with silliness and joy and beauty and everything divine.

    A lofty, but noble aspiration...

    I love it.
    | Posted on 2007-10-18 00:00:00 | by Raivn | [ Reply to This ]



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