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    dots Submission Name: death embraced lovedots

    Author: Hopless Romeo
    ASL Info:    100/female/canada
    Elite Ratio:    1.11 - 0/2/11
    Words: 189
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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       i wrote this one while i was in the suicide ward

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    dotsdeath embraced lovedots

    looking at the blade in my hand.
    my arm dripping in blood scars renew fresh cuts again
    the pain i dont feel my arm like ground beef as i cut more seen the blood my mind trys to feel the pain thats never their
    death a escape from the world i move to the razor mabe now ill feel as i start on the other arm...
    no nothing this box in my room i keep hidden full of my pain and sufering
    will i ever feel? could i love again these thoughts run threw my mind as i carve into my arm
    deeper harder into my arm i bleed on the floor feeling weak
    as i lay on the hard hospital bed the man tell's me i had died for a matter of minutes
    i remember black nothing but black no light no heaven or hell nothing but black like a deep sleep sound no dream just black
    can i feel again can i love? i look at my arm old scars not new i tell myself..... yes i can

    Submitted on 2007-10-18 13:15:35     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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