I kind of agree with previous comment, however I don't think that the words are trying to make up for a long distance relationship. I think it's simply you trying and failing to express how close you want to be to this person with any words, no matter how close you already are.
This write does capture rather nicely what happens sometimes when we try to sum something up in words, but fail miserably. It makes for a bit of a heart rend, and yes, it is touching. But most of all, I love the fact that even though you can't express how you feel right now, you try anyway, because maybe one day you'll find the words. Although myself, I think it is in action that we express ourselves, words and poems are merely a cracked, fogged and barely see-through window into something much deeper.
Very good write, I appreciate how you did this. And it's nice to see something new and fresh on here :)
Very touching ^_^ I could feel the narrator's need to be close to the other person, and that words weren't quite enough, but rather an empty substitute for being there physically. It makes me think of the loneliness of a long-distance relationship. Beautiful write; I'm going to add this to my favorites.
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