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    Author: Hopless Romeo
    ASL Info:    100/female/canada
    Elite Ratio:    1.11 - 0/2/11
    Words: 146
    Class/Type: Poetry/
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    Description:
       a poem for my best friend Fallon


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    dotsFriendsdots
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    we walk together side by side i watch you fall into your pain
    you tell me the world messed,
    you tell me everythings not ok
    as you look at me and clam your my friend
    i try to help as best i can to raise you up from this quick sand
    but you'v fallen so far into this mess every time i try you pull me in with you
    lost in the crowd living alone
    your my best friend seen you this way kills me
    we've been threw alot in this short time together all the good times we have will we remember?
    after this time apart can we still be in eachothers hearts are path's are different now as we walk further apart but always know this your my best friend and you'll always be in my heart




    Submitted on 2007-10-19 09:40:13     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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