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    Author: Hopless Romeo
    ASL Info:    100/female/canada
    Elite Ratio:    1.11 - 0/2/11
    Words: 156
    Class/Type: Poetry/
    Total Views: 891
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 820



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    dotsto tell youdots
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    to tell you...
    to tell you everything in my mind would take to much time
    trying to find the right words to say to take all this pain away
    i fear you'll leave if you know of my past the things i did and what was done
    sometimes i wish i could go back and correct the horrible memories i dream of every night
    sleeping i dread been awake is no better without you here
    my heart and mind scream at me tell her, tell her everything she will understand but my only fear in life is losing you
    the things i want to tell you would you understand?
    could you understand their is more to me then this like a puppet on a string i want to cut free and tell you everything
    someday you will know and then you'll understand all my pain
    to tell you....




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