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    dots Submission Name: Harvest Daydots
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    Author: the heartless
    ASL Info:    15/male/LA
    Elite Ratio:    3.46 - 24/68/43
    Words: 153
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 115
    Average Vote:    3.0000
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    dotsHarvest Daydots
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    Halloween, the day of the harvest
    Some take it for a day of hell
    I say it’s a day we should reap our blessings
    So listen to this little poem
    And remember, Halloween is only what you make it

    This day, this night
    Why does it have to be hours of fright
    Sure, there is no life without a good scare
    But just listen to the music playing through the air

    The soft sounds of the harmonic tune
    Passing through the breeze, in the light of the moon

    Let a smile pass your lips
    As you look to the moonlight tips
    Tips of trees and on piles of hay
    A day is not evil, unless you make it that way

    So let us smile, let us look out the window with no fuss
    Let us look out to the moon, and smile in the day God has made us




    Submitted on 2007-10-19 12:52:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I will have to back blu_kittin up. Hallowen was in fact made because of the end of summer and that day "supposedly" the dead came back to haunt the hour. HOwever i can see what you are trying to say. In fact hallowen should not even exist if you call yourself a christian. It is a pagan holiday but very few know this.

    Back to the writing, the firts stanza is a bit off but everything else is good.
    | Posted on 2007-10-19 00:00:00 | by Tradia | [ Reply to This ]
      originally halloweeen was all hallows eve, because the ghosts and spirits of the dead would roam the earth, and the following day, november first was all saints day, a very religious day, so no matter what you say, it will always be what it has always been
    even before all hallows eve the pagans celebrated it with fearsome rituals
    God and peace trully have no place in halloween
    but thats my opinion

    plus millions of kids are not about to give up dressing in cute and scary and slutty and funny costumes to get treats

    "dose" should be does

    "threw" through

    xoxo
    | Posted on 2007-10-19 00:00:00 | by blu_kittin | [ Reply to This ]



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