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    dots Submission Name: Ladies and gentlemendots
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    Author: armand
    Elite Ratio:    3.42 - 1173/1189/206
    Words: 345
    Class/Type: Rant/Serious
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       My take on things I have done this in the past
    Yes it is vulgar and may piss alot of you off get over it
    after allisn't this whats wrong with us


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    dotsLadies and gentlemendots
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    Ladies and gentlemen it is my understanding that we as race are at the risk extinction
    Holy Jihad and the president of the America
    Child porn-child rape
    Why is it that every fucking day you hear more and more about child sex criminals?
    Why do we lock these people up?
    I know there are more then enough people who are willing to spend seven dollars for a box of bullets and take care of this immoral problem that we have.
    Lets make so.

    I have a opinion
    Fuck Iraq bring the troops home blow the son-of-bitch up build a Wal-mart blow it up
    cause Wal-mart fucking sucks and put a new Disney land there that way we can set up these immoral fuck that I mentioned above and end them.
    After all they are breathing my air and I donít want tainted air.

    I have a opinion
    Fuck Iran too for itís just another war waiting to break out that we can send our people into so that they can die. Let Iran have nuke cause if they did I guaranty the world would be even more of an interesting place to live in then it already is.

    Everyone is quick to say fucking Muslims, fucking rag-heads, fucking sand niggers
    because a small percentage of these Muslims want to see America fall....
    ...what kind of goddamn un-American bullshit is that?
    In some sort of way it reminds me of the sixties when the blacks werenít treated as if they where humans. Ok....now I feel better about that subject.


    While im in suck a wonderful mood FUCK YOU RIAA and your stupid little law suits over file sharing do you really need the money? How about the artist? Do you?
    Nope nada donít think so
    You sued a family who family member died
    said we will give you six months to grieve then we want to see you in court



    FUCK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! as well


    Any who
    thanks for reading




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      I hope you felt better after writing that. It sounds like something that had been building up for awhile.

    If you actually submit this anywhere for serious reading, my only recommendation would be to proofread it a bit and all that, just to strengthen your arguments and make people take you more seriously and all. (when people don't specify what kind of comments they want I usually just go ahead and critique anyway, so feel free to just ignore this whole thing. just thought I'd put it out there.)

    ~Venia
    | Posted on 2007-11-11 00:00:00 | by Venia | [ Reply to This ]
      you feel better for writing that?
    a good rant without restricting yourself is always a good thing.
    i was reading about someone who raped and murdered a girl WHO HAD 150 PREVIOUS SEX CONVICTIONS!! how the hell does that work? holy smokes i was so angry when i read that one...


    it would seem that most i come into contact with are over the whole war in iraq thing. realising that terrorism is a real thing and that it has been hyped to the point of hysteria by bush and govt etc even though there hasnt been many incidents of huge terrorist activity recently... look at manilla... they had a mall blown up the other day... i cannot work out why someone would want to blow up a mall there...

    i think, and this is from a non american perspective, america [as a nation] thinks it is invincible and are realising they may not be.

    anyways... hope your rant has had the release you needed...
    | Posted on 2007-10-22 00:00:00 | by Someones Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
      Well, that was angry...

    You feel better to have gotten that out?
    | Posted on 2007-10-19 00:00:00 | by Raivn | [ Reply to This ]


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