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    Author: Lord Wander
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    Words: 18
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Description:
       Wander is loner who doesent talk alot but when it comes to fighting he knows not give up. The weapons he holds are very old and basic Weapons. After a year Wander Learned Alchemy and become (The Ice Alchemist.)
    Wander sometimes likes to joke around but sometimes he just keeps his mouth shut.
    Waner can only see these so called Colossis but when wander gets mad watch out His Demon side will make all the colossi's wish they were never born.


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    Name: Wander
    Age:unknown
    Gender:Male
    Eyes:Greenish Brown
    Hair color:Dark Red
    Weapons: Sword, Bow an Arow





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