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    dots Submission Name: suitdots
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    Author: headphones
    ASL Info:    18/f/ca
    Elite Ratio:    0.35 - 0/2/3
    Words: 89
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 79
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 569



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    dotssuitdots
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    I'm sick of people with clocks for eyes
    and suits for skin.
    The people with their bluetooth attached to their ears
    and all go to starbucks before work and wait in line for that venti triple espresso.
    They drive their european cars with their fast trak passes and all leather intereior.
    They pay for their bills with that fat check
    and fall asleep forgetting about their true
    aspirations and ambitions in life.
    They wake up, head down on that desk in that cubicle,
    wishing their dreams would come true.




    Submitted on 2007-10-19 17:13:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Yeah, I don't like those preppy pretentious rich people either.

    I'm glad I don't drink coffee. That way I don't have to get up in the morning and have a caffeine dose like almost everyone else. I walk by Tim Hortons (or in this case, Starbucks) and see all the addicts standing in line.

    Money doesn't buy happiness. It buys fun, but not happiness. And fun is nice, but it is not happiness. People often fall into the pit we call emptiness...

    Interesting piece.

    I found a few spelling errors:

    "and all go" --> 'who all go' is what it should be. This ones more a grammar error than anything.

    "trak" --> 'track'. I don't know if you spelled it this way accidentally or on purpose (cause taking letters out of words is cool!).

    "intereior" --> 'interior'

    | Posted on 2007-10-22 00:00:00 | by manwithnoname | [ Reply to This ]
      yes definately, i actually feel bd for those people. it may be corny but its true money cannot buy happiness.

    good write
    keep it up
    buster
    | Posted on 2007-10-19 00:00:00 | by BusterLILblock | [ Reply to This ]



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